LETS HAVE A LOOK IN MYSELF

 LETS HAVE A LOOK IN MYSELF  

 


CONFIDENCE

ELEGANT, ELOQUENT

ADDRESSING, DRESSING, OBSERVING

IN THE SKY, LET ME FLY

DRAINING, DROPPING, DISRUPTING

OVERBEARING, OVERWEENING

OVER CONFIDENCE


                                           


   

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  1. The perfect representation of you!! :)

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  2. After reading this I was just like Wow !!!!! It's an amazing and exact portrait of Hafiz Abdur Rafay. Knowing you I can vouch that everything you wrote is true . InshaAllah your wings will sprout and you will reach high skies. Keep it up !
    Cha gaya hai larkay 😍

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  3. The assonance and alliteration in this poem, simply amazing! The best one I read I have read so far in terms of the poetic devices used. Excellent effort; literally, really well!

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  4. my favorite line is the third one. I have observed all three aspects of you.

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  5. I never believed that some words could describe a person but you have proven me wrong.

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  6. Genuine words as to be expected by you but I guess there is absolutely greater meanings hidden inside your poem.

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  7. I think you mean all the words you used in your poem. The rhythm is good the vocab is fine. Meaning is clear. It's a nice poem at the end.

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  8. As a person, I have found you very dynamic and lively. A TRUE REPRESENTATION OF YOURSELF IN THE FORM OF CLUSTER OF WORDS. Elegantly and exquisitely enclosed in the form of vocables in a scutttle. keep up it and remain realistic.

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  9. Any one can define you by this poem,it reflects your personality,your love for dressing,your confidence and your leadership qualities.Keep flying and their are no limits in the sky.

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